Mock up front cover

This is the draw mock up of my front cover. As you can see, i want the shot to feature my five protagonist out of the band but he lead singer to be at the front in the main focus and the rest to stand behind him, sort of like a triangle shape. The title of the magazine is in very bold letters at the top of the page and i think will stand out to people glancing at it. The name of the band 'Torrents' is featured right across the middle of the page so that fans can easy spot that this band are featured in the magazine. Other bands in the 'indie/alternative' genre that are featured in the maagazine are shown at the bottom, so that possible fans of the bands will see this.